Interesting premise, though I wished the narrative embedded within the notes was a bit stronger. It seemed to be an uneasy mix of randomness & chronological progression. The trivial notes added flavor to the story - which is great - but the man's seemingly interesting personal story's progression was a bit vague though clearly chronological because of the dates.
I also had trouble reading some of the notes quickly enough & I am a veteran subtitle reader.
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ReplyDeleteInteresting premise, though I wished the narrative embedded within the notes was a bit stronger. It seemed to be an uneasy mix of randomness & chronological progression. The trivial notes added flavor to the story - which is great - but the man's seemingly interesting personal story's progression was a bit vague though clearly chronological because of the dates.
ReplyDeleteI also had trouble reading some of the notes quickly enough & I am a veteran subtitle reader.
Here ends Squid's review . . .